[ night is falling ]

Japanese Sunset by Kayalin Czibor

 

[ night is falling ]

 

night is falling
as the sun is sinking into the sea
the once
blue
sea  now

dark
without beginning
and end

we are witnessing
and, inescapably, becoming
part of it

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• 短小漂亮 -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/28/2022 postreply 10:58:56

• 謝謝你。新年快樂！ -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2022 postreply 09:26:43

• 恭喜影雲。首頁進來，謝謝網管，[ night is falling ]推薦成功 -梅雨潭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/30/2022 postreply 19:01:11

• 謝謝版主的鼓勵！ -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2022 postreply 09:26:10

• Very well written! A nice poem! -琴音悅然16- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2022 postreply 10:05:16

• 謝謝鼓勵！新年快樂。 -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 17:58:17

• 影雲新年快樂！你的詩充滿智慧和哲理！英文也是得心應手！讚 -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2022 postreply 12:24:06

• 謝謝共鳴與鼓勵。新年快樂。 -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 17:57:39

• 新年快樂。好美麗的詩，覺得有種無力感，自己也要sink了。 -jianchi9090- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2023 postreply 16:44:33

• 謝謝你。新年快樂。 -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 17:56:44