Down By the Salley Gardens BY WILLIAM BUTLER YEATS

Down By the Salley Gardens

BY WILLIAM BUTLER YEATS

 

Down by the salley gardens

   my love and I did meet;

She passed the salley gardens

   with little snow-white feet.

She bid me take love easy,

   as the leaves grow on the tree;

But I, being young and foolish,

   with her would not agree.

 

In a field by the river

   my love and I did stand,

And on my leaning shoulder

   she laid her snow-white hand.

She bid me take life easy,

   as the grass grows on the weirs;

But I was young and foolish,

   and now am full of tears.   

 

試著翻譯，被笑是民國風

 

悠悠垂柳園

 

悠悠垂柳園

有我心愛相依陪， 

她漫步穿柳園

纖足盈瑩似雪飛

囑我愛情需柔緩

當如枝梢葉萌芽；

悔我年少又癡狂，

執意不從她。

 

河畔芳草田

有我心愛相倚傍，

纖手棲我肩

玉指潤白如雪揚。

囑我生活宜釋然，

當如青草擇堰昌；

悔我年少又癡狂，

今夕淚滿裳。

 

 

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• 好聖潔的歌聲，翻譯得像民國風？還真挺像！：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/20/2022 postreply 13:04:44

• 好聽的歌。翻譯的確有民國風。很有韻味。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (1205 bytes) () 06/20/2022 postreply 18:16:15

• 好詩好翻，可參加《少年》活動，狂也許重了點？（雖壓韻些），年少而不懂，或直接年少又無知：） -AP33912- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/20/2022 postreply 19:20:00

• 民國風很好很優美！！歌詞不怕笑，隻怕沒有韻味 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/21/2022 postreply 07:12:38

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