試翻一個.

來源: 輕輕的我來於 2022-06-18 10:27:54 [檔案] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (283 bytes)

本帖於 2022-06-18 11:51:58 時間, 由普通用戶輕輕的我來編輯

回答: 我和父親日月同輝（征集英文版）由 CBA7 於 2022-06-18 05:55:50

When my father were alive

he is the sun

i become the moon existing in his palm

After my father passed away

he becomes the moon

i am the sun shining in his dream

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• 輕詩人好快！讚一個！ -妖妖靈- ♀ (34 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 10:58:20

• 謝謝更正, 改了. -輕輕的我來- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 11:53:10

• A nice try, thanks! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 12:43:39