When my father were alive
he is the sun
i become the moon existing in his palm
After my father passed away
he becomes the moon
i am the sun shining in his dream
When my father were alive
he is the sun
i become the moon existing in his palm
After my father passed away
he becomes the moon
i am the sun shining in his dream
• 輕詩人好快!讚一個! -妖妖靈- ♀ (34 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 10:58:20
• 謝謝更正, 改了. -輕輕的我來- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 11:53:10
• A nice try, thanks! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 12:43:39