可以多用複合句結合簡單句。try 2b less wordy, 我試試rewrite

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回答: 歡迎大家幫我改改語法。:)妖妖靈2022-05-06 14:21:39

盡量用你的原話

I take for granted that my mother has always been proud of me.(表達一種狀態,一般現代時就可, 從小到大媽媽一直為我而驕傲,完成時更合理)

One day, I asked my mom to listen to my rendition “我依然愛你”and a wonderful cover version by a web singer .   You know what?Still, my mother thought mine was much more musical to her ears!And she said my voice sounded like a singing star!:)

From that moment, I realized my confidence had come from my mother's praising since I was born.

Compliment is when you admire something or someone and you give a compliment. 表達客套時用,
Praise is when something or someone did a good job at something so you approve it.

 

 

My mother has always been proud of me.  I have always been taking it for granted. 

One day, I asked my mom to listen to my rendition “我依然愛你”. At the same time,I asked her to listen to a perfect rendition covered by a wonderful web singer.  這兩句重複字很多,意思表達清楚了,時間狀語就沒必要了。

You know what?My mother still thought my version was much more music(need adj. in here, 'music' is a noun, right?)  to her ears!And she said my singing voice sounded like a singing star!:)

From that moment, I realized my confidence came from my mother's praising started when I was born... :)

 

 

 

 

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