My mother has always been proud of me. I have always been taking it for granted.
One day， I asked my mom to listen to my rendition “我依然愛你”. At the same time，I asked her to listen to a perfect rendition covered by a wonderful web singer. You know what？My mother still thought my version was much more music to her ears！And she said my singing voice sounded like a singing star！：）
From that moment， I realized my confidence came from my mother's compliments started when I was born... ：）
文章是改出來的，非常感謝木木花時間改正！我盡量學，路漫漫：）
移花接木 修改的版本：
可以多用複合句結合簡單句。try 2b less wordy, 我試試rewrite
盡量用你的原話
I take for granted that my mother has always been proud of me.(表達一種狀態，一般現代時就可, 從小到大媽媽一直為我而驕傲，完成時更合理）
One day， I asked my mom to listen to my rendition “我依然愛你”and a wonderful cover version by a web singer . You know what？Still, my mother thought mine was much more musical to her ears！And she said my voice sounded like a singing star！：）
From that moment， I realized my confidence had come from my mother's praising since I was born.
Compliment is when you admire something or someone and you give a compliment. 表達客套時用，
Praise is when something or someone did a good job at something so you approve it.
My mother has always been proud of me. I have always been taking it for granted.
One day， I asked my mom to listen to my rendition “我依然愛你”. At the same time，I asked her to listen to a perfect rendition covered by a wonderful web singer. 這兩句重複字很多，意思表達清楚了，時間狀語就沒必要了。
You know what？My mother still thought my version was much more music(need adj. in here, 'music' is a noun, right?) to her ears！And she said my singing voice sounded like a singing star！：）
From that moment， I realized my confidence came from my mother's praising started when I was born... ：）
歌曲下載鏈接
我依然愛你
作詞：許常德
作曲：劉天健
編曲：屠穎
翻唱：妖妖靈
我緊依你的身子緊握你的手
雨淋濕你的頭發淋濕你衣袖
傘握在手 像不曾擁有
離別時刻 你冷得顫抖
如果你那時說愛我
我不要你走
我以為我已經忘了曾經愛過你
直到我一看到你淚湧出眼底
假裝沙粒 惹我去哭泣
聽你細訴 和她的婚期
走出了機場大門
又是一場 大雨
事到如今 我依然愛你
我孤孤單單留在回憶裏
好想陪你再淋一場雨
要世界為我停止呼吸
任你 在她懷裏 我依然愛你
我永遠記得那一天的雨
來不及說一聲我愛你
隻隨著你靜靜走向分離
(music)
我以為我已經忘了曾經愛過你
直到我一看到你淚湧出眼底
假裝沙粒 惹我去哭泣
聽你細訴 和她的婚期
走出了機場大門
又是一場 大雨
事到如今 我依然愛你
我孤孤單單留在回憶裏
好想陪你再淋一場雨
要世界為我停止呼吸
任你 在她懷裏 我依然愛你
我永遠記得那一天的雨
來不及說一聲我愛你
隻隨著你靜靜走向分離
當雨 下個不停我依然愛你
我孤孤單單留在回憶裏
好想陪再你淋一場雨
要世界為我停止呼吸
任你 在她懷裏 我依然愛你
我永遠記得那一天的雨
來不及說一聲我愛你
隻隨著你靜靜走向分離
愛的你
