再試試，【英譯唐詩】韋應物《秋夜寄丘二十二員外》

懷君屬秋夜，

散步詠涼天。

空山鬆子落，

幽人應未眠。

Happen to think of you this autumn evening,

As I coo over the seasonal cool while strolling.       (1), (2) 

In that deserted hill pine cones should be falling,

And our hermit must still be tossing and turning.   (3)

 

1. To coo over: To talk fondly or appreciatively. 

Example: The family cooed over the baby pictures.

2. Cool （名詞）：The pleasant, slightly cold temperature of a place （涼快，涼爽）. 

 Example: He loved the cool of the early morning.

3. To toss and turn: To move about and turn over in bed because one is unable to sleep.

所有跟帖： 

• It is a piece of cake 4 u to write an English poem.：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/31/2022 postreply 21:11:22

• 其實這首詩不太容易翻好。不過也正因為 -ibelieu- ♀ (1557 bytes) () 04/01/2022 postreply 05:44:53

• 押韻不謀而合：）i also considering weather and either -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/01/2022 postreply 08:04:00

• 讚伊比 -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/01/2022 postreply 08:04:00

• 讚deserted -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/01/2022 postreply 08:05:00

• tossing and turning 輾轉反側，思念得有點厲害，哈哈：） -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/01/2022 postreply 08:06:00

• 被鬆子落地的聲音搞得心神不安啊。：） -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/01/2022 postreply 09:32:20

• 文字很有美感，厲害厲害 -俏君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/01/2022 postreply 09:36:31