流浪的歌手

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流浪的歌手

鳥撲楞的扇著翅膀
飛離我的肩
尋找
從我手指墜落在琴弦上
最後那個
音符

 

 

Troubadour  

The bird fluttered wings
flying off my shoulder
chasing the last note
on the broken string  
dropped from my hand

 

所有跟帖： 

• 五線譜上的音符和落在電線杆電線的小鳥真是一樣一樣的：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2021 postreply 11:25:08

• Good observation and imagination. Thank you BanZhu:) -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2021 postreply 18:48:40

• Lovely! -何仙姑- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2021 postreply 12:01:57

• Thank you :) -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2021 postreply 18:49:02

• 冥 -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2021 postreply 12:30:00

• sort of, but agreed. Thank you Greeeeeeeen :) -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2021 postreply 18:49:50

• New country 大哥大，George Strait 有首歌就叫Troubadour，我聽過無數遍的 -移花接木- ♂ (212 bytes) () 05/29/2021 postreply 13:31:16

• ....I'll b an old troubadour when Im gone -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2021 postreply 13:32:46

• Thank you for sharing. I like this line :) -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2021 postreply 18:50:25

• 簡單來說：我的歌聲讓鳥掉下來羽毛，鳥的羽毛掉到了我的琴上，撥響了我的琴弦。因緣纏繞的歌聲。 -立- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2021 postreply 14:06:02

• really enjoy your interpretation! Poetic! Thank you. -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2021 postreply 18:51:23

• Music-^-^ -青鬆站- ♀ (319 bytes) () 05/29/2021 postreply 18:56:40

• Thank you Evergreen! nice music! :) -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2021 postreply 10:02:01

• Never miss a beat. -LYJiang- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2021 postreply 19:55:52

• Thank you :) -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2021 postreply 10:00:26