這樣改一下不知道可不可以：）

He wanted to go for a spring outing alone, taking a backpack, a camera, and some snackes and hiking in the wilderness all through the day, to look for the footprints of spring in the expanse of the countryside. 

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• 謝蟲！更簡潔明快了。是不是還是用to hike ... and to look for 來表達outing的目的 -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/26/2021 postreply 21:46:00

• 羊羊呢？ -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/26/2021 postreply 21:50:00

• I am sticking around, sir. -LYJiang- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/27/2021 postreply 07:06:24

• 覺得主要行為是have an outing and look for the footsteps of Spring. 其他是輔 -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/26/2021 postreply 21:52:24

• 喜歡這種交流切磋的氣氛。 -天邊一片白雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/27/2021 postreply 06:40:13

• ;)又有娛樂、又有深入、又有淺出，相互學習，共同進步，很哇噻的氣氛！ -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/27/2021 postreply 08:52:00

• 我現在回頭再看你的譯文，明白多了。 -天邊一片白雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/27/2021 postreply 11:31:24