this type of comments. It's really helpful!!!
I would like to move " lonely" before the word "shadow". Is it better?
Playing with my lonely shadow, I rise to dance,
So why not stay on earth?
this type of comments. It's really helpful!!!
I would like to move " lonely" before the word "shadow". Is it better?
Playing with my lonely shadow, I rise to dance,
So why not stay on earth?