“I lonely rise to dance,”” lonely” is an adjective, ...

not an adverb. The adverb is "lonelily" but English-speaking people, for some reason, rarely use it.

On earth, not on the Earth. 

The moon sheds the light, not shed the light, since you have been using the present tense all along. 

I really didn't want to go there. I apologize if I have somehow upset you. I didn't mean it. I meant it to be a friendly exchange of ideas. Last time I checked it, even the best writer was humble enough to thank his/her editor. I am no editor here though, I must emphasize. Enough. Good night!

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• Very helpful. -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/11/2021 postreply 22:29:21

• Thanks sooooo much for your correction. I am looking forward to -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (722 bytes) () 03/12/2021 postreply 05:54:07