引號裏麵是原文，下麵是改動以後的。都是些小毛病，無傷大雅。

1.  "I still clearly remembered was the one she taught us how to listen to English songs"

What I still clearly remembered was the one she taught us how to listen to English songs

2.  "teacher Yang"

Ms Yang (better be consistant)

3.  "lead she to the classroom and went away"

lead her to the classroom and leave (or go away) (would covers lead and leave/go away)

4.  "following the necessary words"

following the necessary rules

5.  "I felt shamed of myself"

I felt ashamed of myself

6.  "I always reminded myself"

I always remind myself

7.  "keep on leaning and never stops"

keep on leaning and never stop

 

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• Thx -woodwishper- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/02/2021 postreply 18:08:03

• 寫的改的都很棒！there is a typo in 7, “learning” instead of “leaning “. -zoey@riverside- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/02/2021 postreply 19:49:47

• 謝謝！我居然沒看出來還copy了。 -AprilMei- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/02/2021 postreply 20:06:18