引號裏麵是原文，下麵是改動以後的。都是些小毛病，無傷大雅。

1.  "I still clearly remembered was the one she taught us how to listen to English songs"

What I still clearly remembered was the one she taught us how to listen to English songs

2.  "teacher Yang"

Ms Yang (better be consistant)

3.  "lead she to the classroom and went away"

lead her to the classroom and leave (or go away) (would covers lead and leave/go away)

4.  "following the necessary words"

following the necessary rules

5.  "I felt shamed of myself"

I felt ashamed of myself

6.  "I always reminded myself"

I always remind myself

7.  "keep on leaning and never stops"

keep on leaning and never stop