鶴沖天 （閒庭信步） 步柳永腳韻 上聲二十哿 中英雙語 （improved version)

閑庭信步。憑欄觀塘荷。
碧綠外嬌花。明如火。
何必沾塵俗。紛爭亂，誰錯對?
山水來伴我。美景良辰。莫負了今兒個。
譯夠雪萊阿倫破 ，靜夜看星辰，一顆顆。
亮透銀河顯。這可能，四時麽?
顧前後右左。無人四野。獨見影兒長拖。

（關於平仄， 調動了一些字（not all) 的位置或用其他同義詞替代）
 

After taking a leisurely stroll,

I enjoy lotuses while leaning against the rail.

beside the deep green, over there, 

are flowers as bright  as fire,

Why should I care about the strife and fight?

Who is wrong and who is right?

The beautiful scenery in front of me

at the moment is my company

and I should cherish it dearly.

I feel tired to translate Shelley and Alla Poe,

the starry sky is the one I should not ignore.

Shining stars in the Milky Way,

Can they  forever stay?

Looking around, I find nobody,

but my own shadow so lonely.



作者：小貝殼

作者：小貝殼

 

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