幾處語法錯誤

來源: 胡華泠 於 2016-12-24 13:05:37 [] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (239 bytes)
回答: Let's fall into it 由 禦宅的風兒 於 2016-12-04 04:50:22

You seem, not you seems

As light, not as a light

too much noise, not too much noises

Too tight, not too tightly

挺好的詩，改了錯就不一樣了

 

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