這句話是否有語病，或是否有更好的說法

As the Chinese saying indicates: two people who have good fate need not to say thanks among them and true friendship is as light, simple and pure as water.

有緣人不言謝，君子之交淡如水。

感謝！

 

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• 覺著 good fate 不合適， 該有更好的， 隻是不隻是啥。 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/12/2016 postreply 22:45:37

• 緣和KARMA一樣應該源於佛教，也許有相應的樊文字 -abookl- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 06:16:59

• 10 Relationship Words That Aren't Translatable Into English -abookl- ♀ (7702 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 06:18:23

• 我也一直覺得“緣”很難翻。不過看本線兩位老師的詮譯，感覺都相當的不錯。 -虔謙- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 21:38:47

• 有緣人不言謝，君子之交淡如水。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (294 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 12:33:21

• 謝謝曦亭老師，喜歡！謝謝！ -虔謙- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 18:13:59

• 信達而已, 雅則可遇卻未必可求. -qianzou- ♂ (144 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 18:14:35

• 感覺好有箴風詩意，學習了！謝謝！ -虔謙- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 21:40:44

• 改為need not say thanks，去掉to -spectre007- ♀ (102 bytes) () 04/14/2016 postreply 07:43:15

• 是的，但... -聚曦亭- ♀ (889 bytes) () 04/14/2016 postreply 16:52:56

• 謝謝！ -虔謙- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/14/2016 postreply 18:51:17