Thank for the comments. Could you shed more light? Treat me as

I like to take this chance to learn more. So please be specific. The whole translation may be a bad work. Let's start with the apparent mistakes and shortcomings and we can work from bottom up.

I like to ask whoever are interested in English poem translation to join this discussion and to share your knowledge.

Thank Xiaoman again.

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