隻匆匆掃了一眼，晚上細讀。

同意你的這個建議：

The world puts off its mask of vastness to its lover.
It becomes small as one song, as one kiss of the eternal.

麵對愛人，宇宙撤下了無邊的麵具。
它變小了，如一支歌，一個永恒的吻。

樓主的和你的comments都好看，要好好和你們學習。