湊趣譯：A Complaint

A Complaint 心怨
by Wordsworth 京燕譯

There is a change--and I am poor;
有轉變了-- 我落魄了
Your love hath been, nor long ago,
不久以前，你的愛
A fountain at my fond heart's door,
如泉湧，柔潤我心房
Whose only business was to flow;
它一味地盡管流淌
And flow it did; not taking heed
汩汩流淌，全然不惜
Of its own bounty, or my need.
它的所有，我的需求
What happy moments did I count!
我曾擁有何等美妙的時光！
Blest was I then all bliss above!
天賜福佑全賦予了我 !
Now, for that consecrated fount
如今，那聖化源泉
Of murmuring, sparkling, living love,
盈盈心語，摯愛火花
What have I? Shall I dare to tell?
我還擁有麽？我敢廣而告之麽？
A comfortless and hidden well.
一眼渴望而不可及的隱泉,
A well of love--it may be deep--
愛之井泉--盡可深邃--
I trust it is,--and never dry:
我相信它，永不幹涸；
What matter? If the waters sleep
又有何謂？倘若那水
In silence and obscurity.
悄然而睡 黯然沉寂
--Such change, and at the very door
如此轉變，恰在心門
Of my fond heart, hath made me poor.
愛的心門。。。令我落魄

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• Great work! -Lucidus- ♂ (6 bytes) () 04/08/2013 postreply 11:29:23

• 非常典雅，向班長學習了。 -LinMu- ♂ (6 bytes) () 04/08/2013 postreply 14:39:58

• Thanks Lucidus and Linmu! -京燕花園- ♀ (6 bytes) () 04/08/2013 postreply 22:07:53

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• 很多精彩之處 學習。 -淘金客- ♂ (6 bytes) () 04/09/2013 postreply 17:47:19

• 感謝淘金客鼓勵共勉。 -京燕花園- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/14/2013 postreply 22:32:35