Nice reflections! 淘大俠早上好！

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與淘大俠商榷：

Most of his elementary school classmates had dropped out of school one after the other, I would change "one after the other" to "one after another" because "one, the other" seems to indicate there were only two.

Only time is restraining. Do you mean only time is limited, restrained? or maybe say: Only time is the restraint.

that used to fascinate him so long ago at his tender age. I heard of at a tender age, at the tender age of 15, but not sure if you can use his/her/my etc. in front of tender age.

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• 謝謝指正，等我去好好省一省再來， ：）。 -淘金客- ♂ 給 淘金客 發送悄悄話 淘金客 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/16/2013 postreply 08:08:19

• 改了: one after the other to one after another; restraining to the -淘金客- ♂ 給 淘金客 發送悄悄話 淘金客 的博客首頁 (74 bytes) () 02/16/2013 postreply 09:05:12

• thanks, 淘俠, for listening to me. -非文學青年- ♀ 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (330 bytes) () 02/16/2013 postreply 14:28:10

• 謝謝緋俠費心認真！我沒那麽細心，大慨可以我就用了。也不知道究竟。 -淘金客- ♂ 給 淘金客 發送悄悄話 淘金客 的博客首頁 (243 bytes) () 02/16/2013 postreply 16:33:01

• now, I am convinced. -非文學青年- ♀ 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (187 bytes) () 02/16/2013 postreply 17:00:13

• 人走多了，便也成了路；錯得多了，變成是對的？ ：）語言是怪物。 -淘金客- ♂ 給 淘金客 發送悄悄話 淘金客 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/16/2013 postreply 17:41:53

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