莎士比亞《Venus and Adonis》翻譯 - 137

Which after him she darts, as one on shore

Gazing upon a late-embarked friend,

Till the wild waves will have him seen no more,

Whose ridges with the meeting clouds contend:

So did the merciless and pitchy night

Fold in the object that did feed her sight.

 

男去不舍神女逐， 

摯友登舟目送遠， 

目見俊男濤中無， 

浪高及天把雲攬：

黑暗爭鬥無情夜，

目不能見物皆滅。

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