A thought-provoking writing!

 

I have not read the book, and can't agree or disagree with you. Just pick a few bricks while I was reading it:

help caring -> help care

have lead -> have led

failed being -> failed at being

in hope of a (the) dreamy, romantic and warm last moment.

applied at places -> applied to places (?)

taken the same moves -> made the same moves

 

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• I deeply appreciate it. -北京二號- ♀ (353 bytes) () 09/14/2012 postreply 05:30:26

• another one -bmdn- ♀ (92 bytes) () 09/14/2012 postreply 06:24:21

• Good. Thanks. -北京二號- ♀ (97 bytes) () 09/14/2012 postreply 06:28:21