哈哈，有意思

來源: doyouknowme 於 2012-09-13 20:27:53 [] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (375 bytes)
回答: 翻譯：王駕《雨晴》 由 sportwoman 於 2012-09-12 20:31:26

我試著在看到MM的翻譯前，自己翻了一下，是這樣的：

The flowers barely bloomed right before the rain
They disappear now although hiding underneath the veins
Butterflies and bees all swarmed over the wall
Seems like Spring has left for my neighbor's hall

為了求個押韻，把葉子用了veins來代替了。wall and hall也是為了押韻。其實可能不太合適。:p

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• Wonderful! Interesting!:))Thank you for joining! -sportwoman- ♀ 給 sportwoman 發送悄悄話 sportwoman 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 09/14/2012 postreply 02:44:35

• Thanks MM. I should have used "hid" in stead of "hiding" :p -doyouknowme- ♀ 給 doyouknowme 發送悄悄話 doyouknowme 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 09/14/2012 postreply 06:08:47

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