翻譯：湖上風來波浩渺，秋已暮、紅稀香少

 基本上我不懂翻譯，主要是喜歡詩詞和想提高英語，順便和海老師抬扛 ， 各位老師多指點，隨意點評！多謝觀看!

湖上風來波浩渺，秋已暮、紅稀香少。水光山色與人親，說不盡、無窮好。

蓮子已成荷葉老，清露洗、蘋花汀草。眠沙鷗鴛不回頭，似也恨、人歸早。

 

Mighty waves are caused while winds blow across the lake

The reds and fragrances have been faded as the autumn is late

Waters and mountains around feel an intimate bond with me

But I can't find more words to express how good this is

See, with the aging leaves, fully developed are the lotus seeds

And the apple flowers and reeds seem to be cleaned by dew droplets

Taking a nap in sand are some seagulls, but they don't look back

It seems that they hate to see me take leave early as the fact

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• 這是我加拿大朋友給發回的反饋原話 -sportwoman- ♀ (170 bytes) () 08/15/2012 postreply 13:10:28

• 我開頭寫的文章和所謂的詩都給他們發，開頭他們感覺新鮮，後來就麻木了就poker face了。 -sportwoman- ♀ (59 bytes) () 08/15/2012 postreply 13:18:40

• Readable English -hammerheadshark- ♀ (756 bytes) () 08/15/2012 postreply 19:17:24

• 多謝鯊魚兄！ -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2012 postreply 19:40:20