謝謝Rock喜歡!

我給你的磚頭上反彈一些磚頭,希望你別介意。

Now I realized that (think) some fears itself is are not to be afraid of (feared), but to be endeared about, as it being a natural (good), healthy, and promoting process (feeling) once (if) you can act upon it. 

Some fears are not to be feared, but to be endeared. 我原句是想押韻的,所以不按你的建議改了,而且是要做speech的,想盡量用比較上口的句子。後麵的我就也不改成分詞了,保持兩個句子。 endear本身是及物動詞,不需要about。

Being working remotely at home, I felt extra vulnerable to the laid-off list. 這是個病句,being應該去掉。

Fear of death, fear of failure and fear of public speaking were the most intrigued me as they are more on the psychological side. 這個句子也是錯的。


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