Congratulations! Welcome back to our world completely!

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回答: 【寫作練習】:My Marathon–Reading Jane Eyre 由 NewVoice 於 2011-10-08 11:40:55

On one September morning: Seems the word "on" is not necessary.

to finish reading the book: Consider "to finish it" for a change.

a sense of unrealness: a surreal sense?

out-of-date: outdated?

throughout space and time: across space and time?

I kept my promise I made to myself: I had made to myself

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• Very good suggestions! 謝謝衝浪!!! -NewVoice- ♀ (125 bytes) () 10/08/2011 postreply 14:45:58

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