的確是long way to go啊

我寫的文章被ESL老師改成全紅色了。錯的地方太多了。native speaker的老師就是不一樣，chance和opportunity都不讓我換著用，因為subtle區別。

You have some problems with subject-verb agreement;  I would help you with this through awareness of count and non-count nouns, singular and plural forms;  there are also some problems with using the correct tense; there are rules for when and why to use a one particular tense in the past time over another tense;  idiomatic expressions are not always used correctly:  this is a matter of practice;  You didn’t stay on topic-your closing paragraph introduces a new topic not mentioned in the main body of the essay.  Lastly, there are some problems with punctuation.  Again, these are rules that can be learned.

這個是ESL對我寫的長文就是online hangouts的評價。看看吧。

今天老師還糾正了我好多讀音上的錯誤。

所有跟帖： 

• 你怎麽找的ESL teacher? -同學小薇- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2011 postreply 16:23:49

• 我上社區ESL的課，今天剛開始。我們社區的，一學期才25刀，一周2個上午。 -i999- ♀ (170 bytes) () 08/30/2011 postreply 16:26:57

• 回複：我上社區ESL的課，今天剛開始。我們社區的，一學期才25刀，一周2個上午。 -i999- ♀ (55 bytes) () 08/30/2011 postreply 16:27:59

• 謝謝你的信息.我也想想看是否上個這樣的課 -同學小薇- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2011 postreply 16:33:09

• 我們這裏也有晚上的班，你可以試試晚上下班後去上。 -i999- ♀ (61 bytes) () 08/30/2011 postreply 16:42:04