的確是long way to go啊

我寫的文章被ESL老師改成全紅色了。錯的地方太多了。native speaker的老師就是不一樣，chance和opportunity都不讓我換著用，因為subtle區別。

You have some problems with subject-verb agreement;  I would help you with this through awareness of count and non-count nouns, singular and plural forms;  there are also some problems with using the correct tense; there are rules for when and why to use a one particular tense in the past time over another tense;  idiomatic expressions are not always used correctly:  this is a matter of practice;  You didn’t stay on topic-your closing paragraph introduces a new topic not mentioned in the main body of the essay.  Lastly, there are some problems with punctuation.  Again, these are rules that can be learned.

這個是ESL對我寫的長文就是online hangouts的評價。看看吧。

今天老師還糾正了我好多讀音上的錯誤。