不錯，其實您可以很清楚的用英文表達您的意思了~~~

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回答: 幾天不練自己知道，別人更知道。好久沒練寫作。今天寫了一封信給舊同事，發出去之前請大家斧正。謝謝。由 i999 於 2011-08-07 23:34:48

您可以很清楚的表達您的意思。我不太會一句句改文，我照您的意思，從新把這一段寫了一遍, 水平有限, 也許您能找到可以借鑒的地方

您的原文的一段, (the third paragraph)

As to me, I am not optimistic about the economy and the job market in US. People like my hubby feel lucky to keep their jobs nowadays. I almost give up the hope of getting a decent job around where I live with my current resume after months of effort. Now I am taking classes to get a certificate in order to keep myself active in the field. I am also considering learning something new that might help me get a job. But I am not entirely sure which direction I want to go. So, I am taking time to polish my English this summer, both in oral and in written. I have to refine my language skills to ensure my quality life. I will be taking some fun courses at a local community college in the coming fall. Still do not know where to go and what to do next year. The good thing is while my girl is still little, I am lucky to get the chance to spend quality time with her. I am also lucky to have my hu*****and's full support, fiscally and mentally. I am hoping that my staying at home could somewhat enrich the lives of my family.

我的改寫 (盡量保持您的 :))

As to me, I’m not optimistic about the economy and the job market sucks in US. People like my hubby feel lucky as long as they can keep their jobs nowadays. After months of futile job-hunting in the city where we live, I almost give up the hope of getting a decent job.

Maybe it is about time to revamp the resume to put my best foot forward and pump it up by adding some new stuff. Now I am taking classes to get a certificate that can give me an edge in the competitive job market. I am also taking some time to polish my English this summer. Moreover I plan to take a couple of a local community college in the coming fall.

To be frank with you, I sill do not know where to go and what to do next year. But at least I have tried my best. Let fate takes care of the rest.

The good thing is that since my girl is still young, I am lucky to get the chance to spend quality time with her. I am also lucky to have my hu*****and's full support, financially and mentally. I hope that my staying at home could somewhat enrich the lives of my family.