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回答: A few comments同學小薇2011-07-25 19:01:54

(1) nourishing a hobby of reading good books ->nourishing the hobby of reading good books?

I feel ambivalent about this one, either way seems to be OK.

(2) the more rewarding is the reading -> the more rewarding the reading is ?

actually, should remove the "is".

(3) also they benefit from it -> they also benefit from it ?

I totally agree with this. I don't know what I was thinking.

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