磚頭來鳥。

The first snow was coming.（你這個句子表將來，好像） How beautiful it was!  It was quietly floated（愚教授已經說了） day and night, covering the hills, covering the meadows, covering the roofs of the residents' houses, and covering the  graves of the dead.   Among the mist（你這是霧吧）, only the rivers drew curly black lines on the beautiful picture. In addition,  the bald trees, with the grayish sky as the background, appeared to be more interlacing and charming. When the first snow came, how silent and quiet it was.  All kinds of sounds  tent？ to be slient and all kinds of noise turned into tender music. The clop of horses as well as the sound of wheels were（這裏覺得該是was，因為主語是clop） not audible any more.  Only the jingle bell played the harmonious melody with the joyous rhythm sounding as（as用的不對，原文as。。。as行） children's heart beating.

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• 謝謝菲教授！你是好教授也是好助教，愚公是好助教也是好教授。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (46 bytes) () 07/14/2011 postreply 23:45:23