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1. old sister - older sister

2. respect terms - terms of respect (not sure, just feel that "respect terms" are not commonly used.

3. I have never strived hard to make it like one - I like the word "strived" used here, but "it" is not clear here.

4. yellow outside - yellow on the outside ("yellow outside" is understandable, but "yellow on the outside" should be used in English writing.

5. deep in our mind is instilled - our minds are instilled

 

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• excellent comments! -lmao- ♂ (945 bytes) () 06/29/2011 postreply 20:57:49