穿上新衣服給我二姐看看！內有磚模牛頓的一段英文，他願意讓大家砸磚

大家不必拘於形式，真把這個當寫作練習的話，可以不是針對個別詞或用法拍磚，而是重寫。 我想可以這樣：如果是你來寫牛頓的這段話，你怎麽寫。因為做翻譯的時候，我們老有點兒受中文的限製，有時候翻得倒不地道了，現在基於牛頓的這段英文自己寫寫，我覺得挺好。

The translation homework has exicted so many English learners' nerve and energy as is reflected in hot comments one after another. This activity should be resumed as it stimulates the practice of English much more strongly than any other exercise.

As you guys have already found that it requires a lot of energy to make corrections. Without corrections, one may feel lacking guide to the right direction. Here I propose to put a paragraph of well translated Chinese text on Monday on the website for us to do the translation, the original English will be added on Friday to compare.

I notice an artical titled "paper tiger" by Wesley Yang, published on New York magzine, caused great hit among Asian-American community.

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• 雖然我的英語更不砸地，要我還寫不出這麽一大段來，要砸錯了希望牛先生不要介意 -金迷- ♂ (1152 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 17:53:02

• See, what did our ancestors say? -北京二號- ♀ (25 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 17:56:17

• 感謝北京二姐守了一天壇子！問候二姐！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (94 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 18:14:22

• 哇，挖，瓦，美風伶牙俐齒。 -北京二號- ♀ (60 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 18:19:50

• 那你天天來這，就每天都能聽到嘍！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 18:27:11

• 哈哈，好，我盡量多來。 -北京二號- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 18:44:39

• 這會不會變“血清”了哇？ -北京二號- ♀ (28 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 18:17:53

• 哈哈，還血小板呢。 真青吧。 -真熱血青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 18:23:03

• 你的舊衣服可是又時尚又經典啊。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (59 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 18:33:21

• 我也覺得這個新衣服別扭，穿著玩玩，今天晚上就脫了。嗬嗬。 -真熱血青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 19:02:26

• 好，就“真青” -北京二號- ♀ (46 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 18:54:13

• 看看低下給你的回複。 -EnLearner- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 19:03:18

• 哈哈，新衣服很張狂，我以後不淡定，怒了的時候就穿那件衣服上。 -非文學青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 21:11:14

• 我又改了改原帖。大家可以寫了單獨開貼post出自己的。 -真熱血青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 18:24:27