Dear Mr. Manager of My Dream Department,
I learned from our intranet that there is an Database Analyst position open for internal transfer in your department, would you please consider me as a candidate.
Attahced herein please find a copy of my resume.
I graduated from San Lv University in China, started work at Microhoo as a Database Analyst from Sep 11, 2000. In the past several months, I have been using what I learned from my web teraining class to improve the month end and quarter end reporting system for our Marketing Department. I am sure I can use my skill to make contribution for your department from day one. I will definitly be very happy to gain more new skills after become a member of your wonderful team and under your strong leadership.
I have yet discussed my intention of moving with my current manager at this moment, I will inform him/her after get a green signal from you.
It will be highly appreciated if you can consider my application.
Would you please let me know what is your advice?
Thank you very much for the consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Slave to be