雪夜駐足小林，重翻一遍。

雪夜駐足小林 （譯飛花落夢）

小林之主你可知
應居不遠村落處
可知駐足立於此
盡賞小林雪遍布

懵懂小馬亦驚異
緣何卻步荒野處
寒林幽昧湖冰封
又是一年最暗時

鬃搖蹄翹鈴叮當
似問行程可有誤
遍野空曠無人答
寒風低語雪絨花

 小林深深引人入
心擱繁務意恐遲
再進一程又一行
方能卸裝得安息

 

                                                                stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening (1923)

－－Robert Frost

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound’s the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.




The woods are lovely, dark, and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

所有跟帖： 

• 不錯不錯 -CRUSH- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 13:44:48

• 謝了謝了 ：） -飛花落夢- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 13:45:30

• 原詩的調子平靜但不輕快， -立- ♀ (104 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 13:51:25

• 這就是再創作了 -CRUSH- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 13:52:40

• 立的評論也有詩意:) -飛花落夢- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 13:53:48

• 後一句卻 -立- ♀ (155 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 14:29:48

• 飛花落地，暗香入夢，青春消逝，唯留回憶 -飛花落夢- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 14:33:57

• 飛花落夢無靜時，這感覺是最後一句，你往前走走唄 -CRUSH- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 14:34:04

• 對啊， -立- ♀ (143 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 14:40:00

• 就是此意:) -飛花落夢- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 14:44:19

• 喜歡mr. Frost 的詩。 -marilyn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 14:22:13

• ：） -飛花落夢- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 15:24:23