翻譯一首詩玩--雪夜駐足小林

雪夜駐足小林 （譯飛花落夢）

 

我猜得出誰是這樹林的主人

他應是住在一個小村

料想不到會有人就此駐足

看他的樹林雪花兒遍布

我的馬兒一定好奇

為何沒靠近農舍卻留步

在這樹林和冰封的湖邊

和一年裏最幽暗的這個夜晚

他搖一搖韁繩上的鈴鐺

想知道出了什麽狀況

卻唯有雪花飄落，微風低吟

多留戀這深邃可愛，夜中的樹林

可是我還有繁務纏身

還要走多少裏路啊，才可睡得安穩

還要走多少裏路啊，才可睡得安穩

 

Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening (1923)
－－Robert Frost

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound’s the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark, and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• 原詩是一首英文七言。每句七個音節。 -賈平凸- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 04:36:16

• 凸哥早上好 -舞女- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 05:02:52

• 才子才子 -CRUSH- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 06:52:51

• 還真麽注意到啊，翻譯歪了。。 -飛花落夢- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 12:17:31

• 才女才女 -CRUSH- ♂ (6941 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 06:51:42

• 你就是傳說中愛幹好事的雷鋒吧？ -才迷- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 09:48:21

• 俺幹啥好事了，有獎勵沒 -CRUSH- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 10:29:31

• 才子才子！：） -飛花落夢- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 12:19:43

• 好 -七零- ♂ (3 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 08:04:50

• :) -飛花落夢- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 12:43:03

• 詩人們是不是都喜歡去小樹林散步找靈感呀 -才迷- ♂ (68 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 09:34:58

• 才哥，我聽說詩人都在叢林中日出的時候靈感特好！ -思念青荷- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 10:30:15

• mark！mark！mark！ -才迷- ♂ (22 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 10:42:00

• 出是誰啊。。 -舞女- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 11:39:48

• 也讀讀看 -飛花落夢- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 12:18:34