Thanks to all. Please help me to make it better.

I learned a great deal from the editing of 'Once upon a time' by Netizens. I am impressed by how great and professional many of our folks are.

And I do not think an English professor will do a better job than what our folks did to my first article.

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• If you turn on your auto-speller, you can at least get rid of so -rancho2008- ♀ (403 bytes) () 07/19/2015 postreply 09:56:55

• Thank you. I look forward to the input from you and everyone. -JasmineZ- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2015 postreply 10:18:52

• Nobody corrected those errors? There are more than 50, I think. -rancho2008- ♀ (165 bytes) () 07/21/2015 postreply 23:41:45

• I corrected a number of mistakes. -JasmineZ- ♀ (77 bytes) () 07/23/2015 postreply 07:27:05

• Okay, it's good you have corrected some of them yourself, -rancho2008- ♀ (5571 bytes) () 07/23/2015 postreply 15:28:09

• I am grateful. I updated the writing. -JasmineZ- ♀ (992 bytes) () 07/25/2015 postreply 04:07:13

• More discussion -rancho2008- ♀ (3323 bytes) () 07/25/2015 postreply 11:20:06

• I can't thank you enough! -JasmineZ- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2015 postreply 03:39:35

• Nice proof-reading and correction. -niteBynite- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2015 postreply 05:46:35

• Thank you. Let the colors in the text signify my appreciations -JasmineZ- ♀ (55 bytes) () 07/26/2015 postreply 05:58:30