Great. But there is room for improvement

來源: 非文學青年 於 2013-03-13 12:18:39 [] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (481 bytes)
回答: Katie Couric The Best Advice I Ever Got, Part 10 由 2msmom 於 2013-03-13 08:02:31

In addition to Xiaoman's:

"keep" in the first sentence is too short.curl up sounds like curled up.

These are questions: these sounds like this

Personal history's stress seems off. It seems to me it should be on "history", yours seems to be on "Per", not completely sure.

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