• good ears, xiaoman -非文學青年- ♀ (115 bytes) () 03/13/2013 postreply 12:03:22
• 多謝樓上二位(小曼,文青)幫忙指正! -2msmom- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2013 postreply 17:33:48
• Great. But there is room for improvement -非文學青年- ♀ (481 bytes) () 03/13/2013 postreply 12:18:39
• 謝謝文青! 又回去聽了一遍原版,你講的對,我的Per(sonal) 太重,原版的Personal 和 -2msmom- ♀ (33 bytes) () 03/15/2013 postreply 17:41:55
• very good reading! -~葉子~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2013 postreply 16:08:11
• 謝謝~葉子~! -2msmom- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2013 postreply 17:44:19