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Please find attached a copy of a news release entitled "ABC Plastic To Feature its Extrusion and Injection Molding Products at the NPE and ANTEC Shows." This news release highlights the output extruder screw.  If I understood correctly, this extruder screw is no longer a viable end product and should not be promoted. This release, to date, has triggered three letter inquiries to the Kansas City office.  However, if we no longer offer this product, it may cause difficulty with potential customers. Would you please advise me on the correct status of this product at your earliest convenience?

 

 

 

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• 不知道原作者的原意。 -EnLearner- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/15/2011 postreply 23:24:52

• 對！ -非文學青年- ♀ (136 bytes) () 09/15/2011 postreply 23:27:50

• 作者的原意就是想知道那個產品的status -jennea- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/15/2011 postreply 23:50:27

• 我還以為人家是給老板寫電郵的。 -EnLearner- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/16/2011 postreply 21:51:42