回複:[Business Writing] Find problems in following writing

來源: 2011-09-15 23:17:50 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀:

 

Please find attached a copy of a news release entitled "ABC Plastic To Feature its Extrusion and Injection Molding Products at the NPE and ANTEC Shows." This news release highlights the output extruder screw.  If I understood correctly, this extruder screw is no longer a viable end product and should not be promoted. This release, to date, has triggered three letter inquiries to the Kansas City office.  However, if we no longer offer this product, it may cause difficulty with potential customers. Would you please advise me on the correct status of this product at your earliest convenience?