老逸，鬥膽改一改你的英語，改錯了不要見怪，大家切磋，共同提高。

老逸原句：if you can get access to their books, can you just post a very small part of each. When I read all, I will give you a definite answer as to their writing of English.  thanks.

改句：If you have access to their books, can you post just a very small part of each? Once done reading, I will give you an answer about their English.

理由：

1.  if you can get access to their books是to get books跟to have access的混用。要get的不是access，是books. 有access，那就貼上來。

2. just用錯了地方，這是中國人容易犯的錯。

3. When I read all：不妥，要麽when I read them all，要麽when I read it all, 但前麵是單數each，不太好處理，故此改。

4. I will give you a definite answer as to their writing of English：as to 不妥，它一般用在句子前麵。

所有跟帖： 

• 非常感謝和樂見這種友誼/有益的討論！ -niteBynite- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 12:07:36

• 另外，你改過的讀起來特順，上口，有感覺。 -niteBynite- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 12:12:34

• 我的看法 -yuanxiang - ♂ (89 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 12:31:46

• 謝謝！2 的錯我以前也經常犯，just,only等位置不對。 -midnightblue- ♀ (92 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 12:31:53

• Great! Like it very much -同學小薇- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 13:45:39

• 回複：老逸，鬥膽改一改你的英語，改錯了不要見怪，大家切磋，共同提高。 -海外逸士- ♂ (482 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 16:52:37

• 第一回合你們二人就都漏了破綻。各打五十大板。繼續操練。 -onceuponatime- ♀ (2 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 23:11:47