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Take It Slow (I Want You to Know) —— 關於四種曲風的探索 (長文)

(2024-12-27 15:56:33) 下一個

這又是一首因為論壇閑聊寫出的歌曲。前幾天瓜兄發了首《小棉襖》,我回帖感歎我們家不到10歲的“神獸”一身反骨,紮心又紮肉。我終於做完了明天壇裏的活動曲目,今天又覺得無聊了,於是開始想要寫些什麽。於是愉快滴決定以這紮心紮肉的“小棉襖”為引子,寫了一首英文歌,講的是Gen Alpha女兒變身成了渾身是刺的小刺蝟,在學習獨立、建立邊界的過程中隨著生理和心理的變化,開始經曆一些情緒波動,表現出了壞脾氣和不耐煩。而我作為家長感受到了這種變化並對此表示理解,同時鼓勵引導她健康成長,走向更成熟的未來。

我沒有太多英文歌曲的輸入,所以這次作曲由Suno代勞,順便探索一下關於不同曲風prompt和tags的設計。我一共做了4種曲風,有效果很不錯的也有比較突兀違和的,但是一次很有意思的實驗,發上壇子裏的帖文就算我自己的筆記吧~:

站在成年人的角度來看,這首歌非常適合做成抒情流行歌曲(Pop Ballad)和獨立流行音樂(Indie Pop)

老父親老母親聽了能好好自我感動一把(哈哈)

Pop Ballad: 適合製作有情感深度、溫暖治愈、強調情感共鳴和旋律抒發的歌曲

Indie Pop: 通常融合多種風格(電子、民謠、輕搖滾等等)以及實驗性的編曲,讓歌曲的情感更獨立自由且富有創意

站在Gen Alpha的角度,做成K-Pop或者Pop Punk一類的風格接受度會比較高,但合不合適兩說……

叛逆“神獸”也許聽不進父母叨叨,但寫成這類風格的歌曲他們也許能聽進去(希望洗腦能成功)

K-Pop:高能量且風格多元(包括流行、電子、舞曲、hip-hop等),體現動感活力及時尚

(PS: 劇透一下,這麽多曲風這個風格最不搭,也許是我年紀大了,哈哈,K Pop的曲子僅供娛樂)

Pop Punk: 節奏感強烈、情感直白、富有能量、年輕化富有自由精神,適合表達反叛精神和自我表現

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Pop Ballad:

Prompt:?Pop ballad with soft piano, strings, and subtle percussion. Emotional, slow tempo and powerful vocal delivery, heartfelt atmosphere

老母親版:

這版有點可惜的是我本來想在“Since when? You started to change”這兩句中製造一種驚訝、手足無措、戲劇性的鈍感,誰知道沒成功…… 沒關係,不影響理解。這一處不是語法錯誤……

歌詞設計:

Take It Slow

Lyrics/Music Design Direction: Aubrey Morrow (暮子默)

Music Vocals: Suno

[Soft Piano Notes]
[Gentle Strings]
[Tender Atmosphere]
[Pre-Verse]

Take it slow, oh take it slow

[Muted Guitar Picking]
[Moderate Tempo]
[Tender Emotion]
[Verse 1]

Hey honey,
You say you don’t want me
to call you baby
You’re a pre-teen,
No longer my tiny little bean

[Subtle Percussion]
[Slow Build-up]
[Confusion, Wonder]
[Verse 2]

That’s so strange
Since when? You started to change
Like an angry hedgehog
Your quills stand tall
with every word we talk

[Layered Strings]
[Emotional Build-Up]
[Reflective Tension]
[Chorus 1]

Ooh~~~
How can I forget?
That’s how growing up is met.
Oh Dear,
You must be confused about your emotions
You must have lots of questions

[Light Synths]
[Upbeat Rhythm]
[Supportive, Reassurance]
[Chorus 2]

I want you to know
You are never alone, (oh you know?)
I’m here to help you grow
I believe you will glow

[Interlude]

[Soft Percussion]
[Piano, Strings]
[Gentle Reflection]
[Bridge]

Life is mixed with happiness and sorrow
Many feelings are bitter to swallow
Your quills are your protection when they show
But don’t let them push love away as you go
Take it slow, oh take it slow

[Emotional Peak]
[Strong Crescendo]
[Powerful Precussion]
[Final Chorus]

Oh~~~
I want you to know
You are never alone, (oh you know?)
I’m here to help you grow
I believe you will glow

[Electric Guitar, Strings]
[Gentle Fade]
[Calm Assurance]
[Outro]

I want you to know
You are never alone, (oh you know?)
I’m here to help you grow
I believe you will glow

[Fading Piano Notes]
[Soft Echoes]
[Melancholic Silence]
[Ending]

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Indie Pop:

Prompt:?Indie pop song with warm electric guitar,? soft synths,? light percussion, catchy, emotional,?relaxed rhythm and modern feel

大哥大姐版:

歌詞設計:

Take It Slow

Lyrics/Music Design Direction: Aubrey Morrow (暮子默)

Music Vocals: Suno

[Softer Piano Notes]
[Gentle Strings]
[Warm Atmosphere]
[Gradual Crescendo]
[Pre-Verse]

Take it slow, oh take it slow

[Verse 1]
[Muted Guitar Picking]
[Moderate Tempo]
[Tender Emotion]
[Emotional Build-Up]

Hey honey,
You say you don’t want me
to call you baby
You’re a pre-teen,
No longer my tiny little bean

[Verse 2]
[Light Percussion]
[Moderate Tempo]
[Subtle Emotion]
[Emotional Growth]

That’s so strange
Since when? You started to change
Like an angry hedgehog
Your quills stand tall
with every word we talk

[Chorus 1]
[Electric Guitar, Bass]
[Upbeat Rhythm]
[Emotional Peak]

[Strong Crescendo]
Ooh~~~
How can I forget?
That’s how growing up is met.
Oh Dear,
You must be confused about your emotions
You must have lots of questions

[Chorus 2]
[Electric Guitar, Synth, Bass]
[Upbeat Rhythm]
[Strong Crescendo]
[Supportive Reassurance]

I want you to know
You are never alone
I’m here to help you grow
I believe you will glow

[Bridge]
[Synth Pad, Percussion]
[Slow Tempo]
[Reflective Emotion]
[Gradual Crescendo]

Life is mixed with happiness and sorrow
Many feelings are bitter to swallow
Your quills are your protection when they show
But don’t let them push love away as you go
Take it slow, oh take it slow

[Outro]
[Electric Guitar, Soft Percussion]
[Soft Rhythm]
[Emotional Resolution]
[Gradual Fade-Out]

I want you to know
You are never alone
I’m here to help you grow
I believe you will glow

[Ending]
[Soft Echoing Synths]
[Emotional Peace]
[Fade-Out]
[Soft Fade-Out]

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K Pop:

Prompt:K-pop song with upbeat tempo,? synths,? electronic drums,? and emotional build-up,? Powerful chorus with strong beat and danceable rhythm

絕望父母夜店買醉版:

爹:寶貝女兒啊,你看看為父呀

媽1:小鬼,你不聽話小心你屁股開花!

媽2: 這首比較古早風,更像美式(RB Pop)風格

爹媽合唱:來來,脾氣爆的話跳跳舞就好了

歌詞設計:

Take It Slow

Lyrics/Music Design Direction: Aubrey Morrow (暮子默)

Music Vocals: Suno

[Intro]
[Synths]
[Electronic Drums]
[Dynamic Build-Up]

Take it slow, oh take it slow

[Verse 1]
[Electronic Bass]
[Fast Tempo]
[Upbeat Rhythm]
[Bright Emotion]

Hey honey,
You say you don’t want me
to call you baby
You’re a pre-teen,
No longer my tiny little bean

[Verse 2]
[Electronic Percussion]
[Fast Tempo]
[Groovy Bass]
[Excited Emotion]

That’s so strange
Since when? You started to change
Like an angry hedgehog
Your quills stand tall
with every word we talk

[Pre-Chorus]
[Synth Layers]
[Fast Tempo]
[Emotional Build-Up]

Ooh
How can I forget?
That’s how growing up is met.
Oh Dear,
You must be confused about your emotions
You must have lots of questions

[Chorus]
[Electronic Bass, Synths]
[Strong Beat]
[Powerful Crescendo]
[Danceable Rhythm]

I want you to know
You are never alone, oh you know?
I’m here to help you grow
I believe you will glow

[Bridge]
[Syncopated Percussion]
[Slow Tempo]
[Reflective Emotion]
[Subtle Build-Up]

Life is mixed with happiness and sorrow
Many feelings are bitter to swallow
Your quills are your protection when they show
But don’t let them push love away as you go
Take it slow, oh take it slow

[Outro]
[Synths, Light Percussion]
[Slow Fade-Out]
[Reassuring Build-Up]

I want you to know
You are never alone, oh you know?
I’m here to help you grow
I believe you will glow

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Pop Punk:

Prompt:Pop punk song with energetic guitar riffs,? driving drums,? and catchy hooks, fast tempo,? rebellious tone,? and anthemic chorus

老父親版:

[Intro]
[Electric Guitar Riffs]
[Driving Drums]
[Upbeat Rhythm]
[Rebellious Tone]

Take it slow, oh take it slow

[Verse 1]
[Fast Guitar Strums]
[Moderate Tempo]
[Emotional Build-Up]

Hey honey,
You say you don’t want me
to call you baby
You’re a pre-teen,
No longer my tiny little bean

[Verse 2]
[Electric Bass]
[Fast Rhythm]
[Confusion, Tension]

That’s so strange
Since when? You started to change
Like an angry hedgehog
Your quills stand tall
with every word we talk

[Pre-Chorus]
[Upbeat Guitar Strums]
[Emotional Tension]
[Anticipation]

Ooh
How can I forget?
That’s how growing up is met.
Oh Dear,
You must be confused about your emotions
You must have lots of questions

[Chorus]
[Electric Guitar, Drums]
[Driving Rhythm]
[Strong Crescendo]
[Powerful Emotion]

I want you to know
You are never alone, oh you know?
I’m here to help you grow
I believe you will glow

[Electric Guitar Solo]
[Strong Emotional Build-Up]
[Instrumental Interlude]

[Bridge]
[Electric Guitar Riffs]
[Slow Build-Up]
[Reflective Emotion]

Life is mixed with happiness and sorrow
Many feelings are bitter to swallow
Your quills are your protection when they show
But don’t let them push love away as you go
Take it slow, oh take it slow

[Outro]
[Fast Guitar Strums]
[Gradual Fade]
[Reassurance]

I want you to know
You are never alone, oh you know?
I’m here to help you grow
I believe you will glow

[Ending]
[Big Finish]

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