A Pretty Night

A pretty night without stars
but we have snowy stars
on the ground

A pretty night without moon
but you are my snowy moon
in the dream

A pretty night with snowy stream
melted in your heart
and the memory froze it hard

A pretty night with sizzling flame
lights up the memory
repainting the ashes with those youthful lyrics
I still have you in my arms
at times
and forever in times

[nuts000]

謝謝騰霧來訪和勉勵，互相學習了

什麽都敢寫:））可談不上都精通。真情各異，談不上指點的:）

[騰霧]

很美的詩。看來雪夜給您帶來很多創作靈感。從古詩到自由詩再到英文詩，還有小說，無一不精通。很?佩。以後請多指點。

詩詞加音樂很美妙。謝謝分享。