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I will dance with you

(2008-06-29 06:35:08) 下一個



1,
I will dance with you
 mycereal

I will dance with you
some time, some day
and somewhere
但不是在我們的夢中

當第一個音符響起
象電流一樣
激蕩了我們的全身
那一串串長長的音符
象我們的生活
象我們走過的路

你在雨天裏走著
你在陽光下走著
你在上坡時走著
你在下坡時走著

我在雨天裏走著
我在陽光下走著
我在上坡時走著
我在下坡時走著

我們從未相遇
我們卻不陌生
直到今天
Let me dance with you
直到今天
讓我看著你深邃的眼睛
看到我們的前世和未來的故事
的縮寫

然後我們微笑著
說聲再見
轉身離去

And
I will dance with you
some time, some day
and somewhere
但不是在我們的夢中


2,
 I will dance with you
     歌兒

你將與我共舞
不是現在
也不是將來

你將與我共舞
不是今生
也不是前世

當那天籟之音響起時
你終會認得我
執我的手
與我共舞到天明

我不尋找
我也不等待
你在那裏
我在這裏
我們從未相遇
我們卻並不陌生
因為
當那天籟之音響起時
你會認得我
與我共舞
直到天明


3,
Please Dance with Me
    南山鬆

I don't know your name,
I don't know your age.
I don't know where you come form,
I don't know where you are going.
I just know you are a beautiful young girl,
and I am a handsome young man.

I've never seen you before,
and I don't know if I can see you tomorrow.
But I want to dance with you,
the young lady.

Please dance with me,
the pretty girl.
Let's share the happiness together,
and have a good time together.

Under the bright sun,
or in the tender rain,
in the soft music,
please dance with me,
the young beautiful lady.


***
Noodle
by: longhair

Last night,
I asked
Do you like me make Chinese noodles,
The one just like noodles in Kungfu Panda
Every one replied:
Kungfu Panda noddles? Great!

I peeled the shell of shrimps
He cut green onion
I took some vege leaves from garden
and washed

Boiled a big pot of water
Waited until it was boiling,
Put in a pack of buckwheat noodles
and a net with shrimps and leaves

While noodles were dancing
I took 5 bowls
2 big and 3 small
Put in frozen beef fat
vegetable oil
soy source
green onions
and salt

Noodles were done
Spooned boiling water to bowls
Chopsticked noddles to bowls
Served with forks or chopsticks

Surprisely, even the most picky one
liked it!

I will dance with you
 longhair

I will dance with you
Today, now
At the new house
After guests leaving from the party

It was known as
a house warming party
But
It is actually
a surprise birthday party
Everyone else knows except you

You worked hard to
invite friend to the party
prepare for the party
do BBQ during the party
Until the moment when you were asked to
enterthe room with eye covered
You found out
you were doing everything for
your own`s party

We were in such a hurry
to finish every decoration in few mins
while you are outside cooking
I was so on the moon
even forgot the gift bought in girl`s night
You did now know
the girl`s night was just an excuse
of course girls did have nice time

How coud you arrange it?
You have had no way and no time
You were wondering

Good to have friends
I laughed with answering

What if I said,
Girl night? No way...
You joked

If that was the case
you would not worth to receive the gift
I smiled without saying

Now, party is over
People left with full stomach and joyful face
Kids are sleeping
Quiet and peace returns to us

Let me dance with you
Today, this moment
At our new house
As we did
At my old appartment
At the beginning

I will dance with you
 小屁涵
1.
我們曾經共舞嗎?
在前生
某個
落花飛舞的風中

在Waltz醉人的旋律裏
我依傍在你的臂彎
旋轉
世界混沌
天地合一
唯有你和我
依舊清晰

仰起頭
沉醉在你英俊的臉龐
你溫柔的回眸
是我三生的
期盼

2.
當樂聲再次響起
我們交換舞伴
從此
我心隨你翩翩飄遠
等待,隻為再次相遇
這一等
你我交錯了幾個世紀

雲滅了又起
雨雪交交替替
不變的等待隻因一個許諾
--永遠

3.
相遇。
佛說:
為這一天,你要修煉三千年
耐心的等待
隻求
一次完整的絢麗

如果你來生為樹
也讓我為滿樹婆娑
即使飄落
也落入你的根基

當樂聲再起
讓我們再次起舞
在,落花飛舞的Waltz裏
和而為一
 
 
 

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mycereal 回複 悄悄話 小屁涵: 你寫的真美。人和人相遇,真的是一種緣分,同一個時代,在60億人之中。那麽和老公在一起,那真是莫大的緣分了。
小屁涵 回複 悄悄話 1.
我們曾經共舞嗎?
在前生
某個
落花飛舞的風中

在Waltz醉人的旋律裏
我依傍在你的臂彎
旋轉
世界混沌
天地合一
唯有你和我
依舊清晰

仰起頭
沉醉在你英俊的臉龐
你溫柔的回眸
是我三生的
期盼

2.
當樂聲再次響起
我們交換舞伴
從此
我心隨你翩翩飄遠
等待,隻為再次相遇
這一等
你我交錯了幾個世紀

雲滅了又起
雨雪交交替替
不變的等待隻因一個許諾
--永遠

3.
相遇。
佛說:
為這一天,你要修煉三千年
耐心的等待
隻求
一次完整的絢麗

如果你來生為樹
也讓我為滿樹婆娑
即使飄落
也落入你的根基

當樂聲再起
讓我們再次起舞
在,落花飛舞的Waltz裏
和而為一
mycereal 回複 悄悄話 longhair: 深情款款, 幸福的夜晚,幸福的party, 幸福的生活。。。祝賀你們,也祝福你們。
mycereal 回複 悄悄話 小屁涵: 轉吧,這裏的東東隨便轉。你喜歡就好。
longhair 回複 悄悄話 I will dance with you
Today, now
At the new house
After guests leaving from the party

It was known as
a house warming party
But
It is actually
a surprise birthday party
Everyone else knows except you

You worked hard to
invite friend to the party
prepare for the party
do BBQ during the party
Until the moment when you were asked to
enterthe room with eye covered
You found out
you were doing everything for
your own`s party

We were in such a hurry
to finish every decoration in few mins
while you are outside cooking
I was so on the moon
even forgot the gift bought in girl`s night
You did now know
the girl`s night was just an excuse
of course girls did have nice time

How coud you arrange it?
You have had no way and no time
You were wondering

Good to have friends
I laughed with answering

What if I said,
Girl night? No way...
You joked

If that was the case
you would not worth to receive the gift
I smiled without saying

Now, party is over
People left with full stomach and joyful face
Kids are sleeping
Quiet and peace returns to us

Let me dance with you
Today, this moment
At our new house
As we did
At my old appartment
At the beginning

6.29.08
小屁涵 回複 悄悄話 麥片: 這首詩很喜歡!!!

'我們從未相遇
我們卻不陌生
直到今天
Let me dance with you
直到今天'
這是前生的約定.

'然後我們微笑著
說聲再見
轉身離去'
瀟灑的釋懷

'你在雨天裏走著
你在陽光下走著
你在上坡時走著
你在下坡時走著'
看著看著,我的眼眶濕了.我可以轉貼這首嗎?
歌兒的這首也很惟妙惟美,一並貼了! 不客氣.赫赫.

南山鬆: well done!歡迎,歡迎!




mycereal 回複 悄悄話 老鍋餅,你的評論,也很好很好。
老鍋餅 回複 悄悄話 你們都寫的好好啊,我就不獻醜了,做個看的人把!
鬆,你好牛啊,寫得真的很有韻律
歌兒的也好
長發姐姐的也很好
麥片的也很好很好
mycereal 回複 悄悄話 通知,因為長發mm也寫了一首詩,我才剛剛看到,我很喜歡。有一種認真的,仔細和閑適地做麵條的感覺。所以就貼在這裏,方便大家。歌兒都先看到了,厲害。
mycereal 回複 悄悄話 南山鬆: :)))

另外通知一下大家,小屁涵又寫了一首好詩,在我昨天的“灌水篇”那裏。
南山鬆 回複 悄悄話 我確實少寫了兩個"know".剛讀我的原文才發現.

南山鬆 回複 悄悄話 回複mycereal的評論:
Thanks!
mycereal 回複 悄悄話 南山鬆: 我覺得你的詩真的寫的很好,詩感十足,韻律十足,。。。我都可以跟著它跳了,嗬嗬。
by the way, 你想必是寫的很快,一氣嗬成,也許漏了一兩個“know”,我幫你添上了。
南山鬆 回複 悄悄話 跳舞得有舞伴,我幫你找了一個.

Please Dance with Me

I don't know your name,
I don't know your age.
I don't where you are come form,
I don't where you are going.
I just know you are a beautiful young girl,
and I am a handsome young man.

I've never seen you before,
and I don't if I can see you tomorrow.
But I want to dance with you,
the young lady.

Please dance with me,
the pretty girl.
Let's share the happiness together,
and have a good time together.

Under the bright sun,
or in the tender rain,
in the soft music,
please dance with me,
the young beautiful lady.
mycereal 回複 悄悄話 南山鬆: 你喜歡我就很高興。
歌兒: 你那有點難度,“不是現在, 也不是將來;不是今生,
也不是前世”, 那是何時。 我那是一般將來時。不過你寫的也很浪漫啊。



歌兒 回複 悄悄話 剛看了,原來是一場半虛構的前世今生的浪漫,嗬嗬。並不真實舞蹈。

你將與我共舞
不是現在
也不是將來

你將與我共舞
不是今生
也不是前世

當那天籟之音響起時
你終會認得我
執我的手
與我共舞到天明

我不尋找
我也不等待
你在那裏
我在這裏
我們從未相遇
我們卻並不陌生
因為
當那天籟之音響起時
你會認得我
與我共舞
直到天明


歌兒 回複 悄悄話 失算了,今天居然是兩個沙發!
算了和大餅分瓜一下今天的沙發也不錯。我對音樂和舞蹈都沒悟性,就在這裏當觀眾吧。
南山鬆 回複 悄悄話 Good poem.
Really romantic.
I like it.
mycereal 回複 悄悄話 恭喜坐到沙發。
老鍋餅 回複 悄悄話 沙發
晚上在來玩
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