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How I Started a Snowman


by: Alexander Li


When I was making a snowman, I didn’t know what to do. But then I had an idea. I was making the head. But then I give up because I couldn’t get it out and then my mom said to come in. But I didn’t because I weren’t jealous about building a snowman. So then I came in because my mom told me to (then again).


Tomorrow I started a snowman with my sister and dad. I still didn’t know what to do but then I saw my dad roll a ball. I asked if I could do it and my dad said yes. So I helped him do it. But my sister wanted to do the head because I already helped my dad. But then we needed a carrot so I went inside to ask mom for a carrot and she gave me one.


I came back outside and the snowman was finished! Instead of coal it was twigs. But no arms. I can’t get a branch a pull it off because it needs to grow.

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不少拚寫和文法錯誤。他願意寫我就高興了。
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秋月冬雪 回複 悄悄話 回複 '阿小餅' 的評論 :

餅餅好。剛剛把以前寫的東西搬到博客。:)
還有一些要搬。
阿小餅 回複 悄悄話 說的對,願意寫最讓人高興,願意寫,非常重要!:D
阿小餅 回複 悄悄話 嗷也,一氣兒貼了這麽多,真好,額慢慢看:D
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