:::::一首酸溜溜的情歌:::::

SONG OF MAY

 

Comes from the blue Jay---

for him, the wounded sky no longer gray

~ ~ ~

Upon the soft pillows of hay

Spring Lovers lay---

your perfect feathers dance

in the everlasting ray

 

O, 我的小妹

Come away

Come away!

Never too late

to learn how

to fly!

 

O, 我的小妹

五月的你－－

嗓音如此迷人

歌聲那樣

嬌美！

作舟'06

[z.f.]

YY: never think so . . .otherwise, that popular poem will become a pop song. . . as we said before, a reader is like a mirror, reflecting whatever he/she can catch or understand, but can be enlightened . . . reading sometimes is assuming . . .

讀詩的人本來就不多，認真讀的就更不多，"所有讀者"，其實也沒多少:))

那好吧，我以後就當每首詩歌都是寫給“我”的來讀:)這樣可能能讀得更深透些? 謝謝YY指教。。。晚安。。。

[影雲]

zf:詩歌是寫給所有讀者的

never think so . . .otherwise, that popular poem will become a pop song. . . as we said before, a reader is like a mirror, reflecting whatever he/she can catch or understand, but can be enlightened . . . reading sometimes is assuming . . .

[影雲]

詩歌裏的可以包容的聲音很多；就象ANNA SWIR的詩歌，難以以“輝煌的大框框”來
分類，如果用“愛”來回答，就不“準確”。。。所以，我不以為“愛”是詩歌的
唯一主題。。。

[z.f.]

YY，確實，你說的沒錯，“妹妹找哥淚花兒流”是用的引號:)
另外真實情感，嫉妒，恐懼，無病呻吟，喪心病狂都可以叫人類的真實情感，我們說的詩裏歌裏的不酸應該是愛吧。。。比如山歌裏哥呀妹呀的愛，詩歌裏的愛。。。
關於愛，詩人最有發言權！！你們說了算。。。詩歌是寫給所有讀者的，讀者隻是在詩歌裏讀愛感受愛，除非是個人情書，讀者就感受不到了。。。
if i sing
like that
bird in the tree
i can learn
something new
about love
each day
. . .

[影雲]

妹妹找哥淚花兒流：
酸？不會吧！

真實的情感，譬如山歌，那哥呀，妹呀，唱的，很純呀。。。

酸，來自無病呻吟。。。

[未夕]

"周末有好酒" 將進酒，杯莫停！:)

[作舟詩集]

各位周末好!

文學城"駁客"新版越來越具"中國特色"---庸俗廣告增多,有向國內三流網站看齊趨向!!!也是預料之中的...

水滴, 我的"情歌"和"卡拉OK"相比是忽悠了點兒:)) 否則,不就真成了“妹妹找哥淚花兒流”了麽???

WX,周末有好酒別忘了作舟喲!! :))

[未夕]

唱山歌羅喂 。。。好聽！

水滴："I hate the new format" too. it doesn't support html. no songs and pictures for a while in comment area :(

[by水滴]

is there a "song", or just 忽悠？ :)

btw: I hate the new format. very much feel lost!

[作舟詩集]

有“妹妹找哥淚花兒流”溜溜酸麽??? :)
haha....!!
thanx!!

[z.f.]

酸溜溜??? 有“妹妹找哥淚花兒流”溜溜酸麽??? :)

很好聽，還是挺詩意的情歌呢，謝謝分享！！！

[作舟詩集]

沒"倒牙"就好了:))
與大夥兒同樂!!!

[y.y.]

呀呀呀，嘿/喂/妹/媚/美。。。好好聽的歌！

：)