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if i live

closely enough

i can learn

something new

in each song

. . .

if i sing

like that

bird in the tree

i can learn

something new

about love

each day

. . .

if i can

keep

going at

it

i might find

something

new about

you

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[作舟詩集]

影雲, 別說自己"賣瓜," “幺喝”還是需要地！
：））

[y.y.]

“老泰”值得一讀，還是“米勒爺”的“偶像呢：)
盡管人們說他過時了，那是因為很多人用情詩的角度來讀 。。。實際上它們是靈性
的詩篇。。。說實話，讀者還得有一定的精神境界[呀，不是影婆賣瓜了嗎]

:)

[作舟詩集]

沒怎麽讀過"老泰"的東西.....
但,你讓我感到榮幸了:)-----------謝謝

[y.y.]

in 吉檀珈曆 裏的詩篇。。。

[y.y.]

其實這首詩歌，讓我覺得很有泰戈爾的詩的心境。。。尤其在裏的詩篇。。。

[作舟詩集]

影雲,你說的極是!!
你閱讀的角度很有"營養":)

[y.y.]

what exists in the poem is timeless

listening:
singing:
searching:
loving:
. . .

"something new" is part of being and has always been there
we open ourselves, and then open a window to see it, feel it . . .

i like the “internal accumulation” of feelings in the poem . . .leading to You . . . of course, this You is more than the you in how-are-you. . .

[作舟詩集]

hi yy::::::::::::::
you can read "timelessness" out of that???
:)

[y.y.]

timeless . . .

:)

[作舟詩集]

hi::::zf:::::::thanx:::::::

[z.f.]

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