z.z.2006-04-07 20:32:57回複悄悄話
幽默 and 搞笑 are two different things, i think....
the word "搞" has very negative connotations, to me at least....think about it ... it shows the casual, so-so quality of the action as well as the result...
its equivalent in English might be "get" ... get this, get that, etc..
real humor, i think, has wisdom in it besides what makes people laugh and think and laugh again ...
not really ... i didn't "perform" it to an audience ...
haha.....u funny!!
glad a male friend can translate a poem like this ... :)))
like your variation too!
you are funny!!!!
zf,
路在腳下。。。衝啊。。。:))
~&~
這首詩的WHOLE BODY:
靈 (picture/flash)
肉 (poem)
足 (note)
路在腳下。。。衝啊。。。:))
(我在想如果每個人都成了靈與肉的整體,這個世界豈不有可能變共產主義?????? 到時豈不是沒了幽默。。。。。。
一天
我正握著
我的陰莖
猛然
對後現代主義
大澈大悟
藝術/詩歌讓人感覺愉快感覺痛快,還因為它的反叛精神。。。這首詩裏的痛快之感在於反叛。。。
one day
i was holding my pink slip
&
come to understand
the whole scope of
capitalism
@ @
^
I AGREE!!!!!
藝術/詩歌在我的心中很美很純淨很享受。。。不然我為什麽要讀詩歌???
這首詩,如果沒讀 note,沒有因為配圖和note 裏的提示讓我想起“覺”和“覺”裏的另一副插圖的話,我不會覺得真幽默。。。
laugh and think and laugh again ...
the word "搞" has very negative connotations, to me at least....think about it ... it shows the casual, so-so quality of the action as well as the result...
its equivalent in English might be "get" ... get this, get that, etc..
real humor, i think, has wisdom in it besides what makes people laugh and think and laugh again ...
“one of the things lacking in modern Chinese poetry is humor。。。 ”很正常吧,詩歌是否也搞笑?對不起,我對待詩歌的態度是不是太嚴肅了點兒。。。請指正。。。
I read the WHOLE BODY of the poem (the picture/flash, the words and the note...)
讀完覺得很好笑很好笑。。。
期待你寫首詩,能讓咱們直勾勾地瞧一瞧。。。:)
好難啊。。。:(
:)
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:))
happy friday!!!
laugh, laugh whenever you can ....!!!
one of the things lacking in modern Chinese poetry is humor, i think ....
many of our poets are wrapped up too tight, or too fragile to withstand criticism ....
no wonder you have such a good TASTE
eat well!!!
remind me the art by alex grey you posted in your article "覺" ...
a human being has more than one thousand eyes...
IT is always there...
cannot help laughing:))))))))))))
i am all for a woman's rights to attack any ism !!!!!
for fun :)
Someday
I was naked
in the morning sun
&
seeing the scars
on my body
left by surrealism
: indeed surrealism "enjoys" "dissecting" woman body :)