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one day

i was holding

my penis

&

come to understand

the whole scope of

post-modernism

 

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z z

 

note: Some iguanas have a third eye that helps regulate how long they expose themselves to the sun (flash credit: fUSION).

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z.z. 回複 悄悄話 行為藝術 :))))

not really ... i didn't "perform" it to an audience ...

haha.....u funny!!
地中海人魚 回複 悄悄話 行為藝術。。。
作舟詩集 回複 悄悄話 wx000,

glad a male friend can translate a poem like this ... :)))

like your variation too!

you are funny!!!!

zf,

路在腳下。。。衝啊。。。:))


~&~
z.f. 回複 悄悄話 靈與肉。。。(主義多多,哪個主義“WHOLE”???)

這首詩的WHOLE BODY:

靈 (picture/flash)

肉 (poem)

足 (note)

路在腳下。。。衝啊。。。:))

(我在想如果每個人都成了靈與肉的整體,這個世界豈不有可能變共產主義?????? 到時豈不是沒了幽默。。。。。。
wx000 回複 悄悄話 trying to translate it

一天
我正握著
我的陰莖
猛然
對後現代主義
大澈大悟
z.f. 回複 悄悄話 laugh and think and laugh again ...

藝術/詩歌讓人感覺愉快感覺痛快,還因為它的反叛精神。。。這首詩裏的痛快之感在於反叛。。。
wx000 回複 悄悄話 haha.. 模仿一下

one day
i was holding my pink slip
&
come to understand
the whole scope of
capitalism

@ @
^
z.f. 回複 悄悄話 "real humor, i think, has wisdom in it besides what makes people laugh and think and laugh again ..."

I AGREE!!!!!

藝術/詩歌在我的心中很美很純淨很享受。。。不然我為什麽要讀詩歌???

這首詩,如果沒讀 note,沒有因為配圖和note 裏的提示讓我想起“覺”和“覺”裏的另一副插圖的話,我不會覺得真幽默。。。

laugh and think and laugh again ...
z.z. 回複 悄悄話 幽默 and 搞笑 are two different things, i think....

the word "搞" has very negative connotations, to me at least....think about it ... it shows the casual, so-so quality of the action as well as the result...

its equivalent in English might be "get" ... get this, get that, etc..

real humor, i think, has wisdom in it besides what makes people laugh and think and laugh again ...
z.f. 回複 悄悄話 但是真正的幽默詩應該是最難的吧。。。詩人提倡“幽默”詩???

“one of the things lacking in modern Chinese poetry is humor。。。 ”很正常吧,詩歌是否也搞笑?對不起,我對待詩歌的態度是不是太嚴肅了點兒。。。請指正。。。

I read the WHOLE BODY of the poem (the picture/flash, the words and the note...)

讀完覺得很好笑很好笑。。。

期待你寫首詩,能讓咱們直勾勾地瞧一瞧。。。:)

好難啊。。。:(

:)

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:))

happy friday!!!
z.z. 回複 悄悄話 i know friends on here all have a good sense of humor ...

laugh, laugh whenever you can ....!!!

one of the things lacking in modern Chinese poetry is humor, i think ....

many of our poets are wrapped up too tight, or too fragile to withstand criticism ....
z.f. 回複 悄悄話 good sense of HUMOR

no wonder you have such a good TASTE

eat well!!!

remind me the art by alex grey you posted in your article "覺" ...

a human being has more than one thousand eyes...

IT is always there...

cannot help laughing:))))))))))))
y.y. 回複 悄悄話 hahahaha :) you're in!!!
z.z. 回複 悄悄話 :))))

i am all for a woman's rights to attack any ism !!!!!
y.y. 回複 悄悄話 love it!!!

for fun :)


Someday

I was naked
in the morning sun

&

seeing the scars
on my body
left by surrealism

: indeed surrealism "enjoys" "dissecting" woman body :)
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