Holding dreams in rocking chair (圖)

Holding dreams in rocking chair

Sun bleeds on your dress

Books smiling wetly

Whose tears on

Time's dagger

 

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[z.f.]

adios!

ciao!

take care!!

[z.z.]

dodo?!?!?!?

:)))

adios!

[地中海人魚]

Bravo, How do you know that?

all the best wishes to all of you! dodo, ciao!

[y.y.]

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is this what you want to display?:)

[z.z.]

jaaa?

zzzfff??

is that French???

"我的電腦是個好寶貝"

:)))

美人魚, how's everything??

glad to see you back!!!

~&~

[地中海人魚]

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jaaa zzzfff, very special aura spreading from all the poems...

[z.z.]

大家一起愛詩歌，好開心，好開心。。。:)))

!!!!!

that's what i need/want to say....

reading your translations make me realize how much poetics inside each of you!!

bravo!!!

cheerio!!!

~&~

[知凡]

美人魚,你說的"華美"我想是說的詩中的"氣"自華,是嗎...

"意象鮮明強烈" 我同意...而作舟最近的幾首新詩,矜持盡化,形跡超邁,而"氣"依然自華, 某種"無形"似水流淌...

[y.y.]

在搖椅裏緊守著夢
你的裙子上有太陽的血跡
書本濕濕地微笑
時間的利刃上
掛著誰的
淚滴
？

[play :)]

[知凡]

“觸目驚心的華美，意象鮮明強烈”

美人魚，你說得更是，你是詩人，比我更了解。。。不是好話，是直覺是感覺，我讚美詩歌！！！

好開心大家一起愛詩歌，好開心，好開心。。。:)))

[地中海人魚]

在搖晃的椅中，握著夢
陽光的血滴濺於華裳
書頁濕濕地笑
那是誰的淚水
飛在時光的
短劍之上


知凡好話都說盡了，再加兩句。觸目驚心的華美，意象鮮明強烈。相信所有讀者讀了會有所感悟。

我的電腦是個好寶貝。

[by水滴]

I pictured an aged person...
bathed by the setting sun...
reminisce.........

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:))))

[知凡]

忘了說，還有兩個小配圖在旋轉。。。甚是意蘊迷人。。。:)

[知凡]

握著夢 搖晃的椅
陽光滴血於你的衣衫
書籍濕潤地笑著
誰的眼淚飛在
時間的短劍
？
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[非常非常精美的小詩，畫麵感強，氣慣其中，一戛即止，效果驚心。。。亦有理趣。。。文字及標點和配圖，造型優美魅力非凡:))

起始如波似浪~~~~~~~ 尾收“Time's dagger”〉〉〉

餘音：

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[影雲]

mmm, your friend, realism 的幹活?:)

very nice painting . . . on my mind . . .:)

[作舟詩集]

that's exactly what he said ....except he doesn't have a good grasp on surrealism ....

:))

[影雲]

surreal . . .:)

[作舟詩集]

eidolon [??]

i tested this poem on my friend [non-poet] abd he thought it was weird :))

i trust your guys' taste more, i guess ...

cheers!!

[z.f.]

精美驚心。。。

[作舟詩集]

u r

soo

kind

!!!!

:)

[律周]

eidolon.
在思想的精靈.

[影雲]

love it so much . . .!!! all of them . ..