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March 14, Sunny ___________________________________ She has a mullet Older than the other Dark haired, heavily attired Partner, or girlfriend rather? No sleek, womanly forms Nor painted fingers walking On pointy stilts in tight skirts They are not sexy, not The head-turning type There they are Locked in each other’s arms Hands over nape On the sunny street corner Where buses converge First, they touched lips Saying goodbye Then it turned into a French Kiss: savoring deep Into each other’s flavors Writhing with appetite Invisible squirming Downright obsessive Obliviously . . . . A poem is often “incidental” Like witnessing the kiss Behind the wheel On a sunny street corner Between the two women Like twisting silken scarves into a fancy knot What is a kiss? What is a poem, in this matter? Remember the joke? “What does a human need a tongue for?” Anyway, one thing is for sure That I am happy to be living In the world of love + z.z.
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LTG 回複 悄悄話 thank YOU!!!

creativity comes from LOVE, i believe.....love of fellow human beings, animals, nature....the whole universe.....

when LOVE is incomplete, one's art is destined to be handicapped....

your thoughtful comments make this blog worth continuing...

:)

cheers, all!!
知凡 回複 悄悄話 I think my thoughts was inspired by "my poem has "purified" the moment..."...but I don't know how to say clearly...

thank you for sharing beautiful things make me Think always...
知凡 回複 悄悄話 "Just as there are two orders of human knowledge, two kinds of wisdom, two traditions, two everything...."

我這裏所說的“美”不是那種標準的美,我指的是那些能 nourish us 的“美”,比如這首詩歌裏的瞬間。。。

"I have no money, no resources, no hopes. I am the happiest man alive."

米勒會這樣說,以他無論在何種境地,無論和怎樣的人在一起,他都能感到被 nourished。。。找到“美”感。。。另外與他無盡的創造力有關,無盡的創造力又來自什麽都能 nourish 他。。。比方說啃豬蹄兒:)))))))))))
影雲 回複 悄悄話 激情->純淨->震撼:)
LTG 回複 悄悄話 YY: "...激情的純淨"... :)

i think my poem has "purified" the moment...:)

ZF: "...看到美使人快樂,快樂的人常看到美..."

well said!!

thanks guys!!
知凡 回複 悄悄話 ......
“What does a human need
a tongue for?”
Anyway, one thing is for sure
That I am happy to be living
In the world of love

一顆愛的心多看到的是美。。。喜歡!!!

世界真的有很多美麗動人之處,看到美使人快樂,快樂的人常看到美。。。

這首詩的寫作手法我也很喜歡。。。

同意作舟樓下發言:)

“i think "自由" is actually not the ultimate goal in life....

the happiest person[s] are those who can still love, share love through doing beautiful things, such as creative things or helping each other....“
影雲 回複 悄悄話 我喜歡你抓住的這一瞬間,來自激情的純淨。。。感人!!!
LTG 回複 悄悄話 thanks, y.y.!!

to be honest, at first i was not sure about writing it....

but then, i thought watching two women so passionately kissing on the street doesn't happen very often....:))
影雲 回複 悄悄話 loveit!!! just because of love in it . . .
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